So I've found a publisher (an actual publisher not a vanity press) for Unconditional ... below is a piece of the review from their senior editor. I know many of you have read it's various versions and all have told me it's good, some numerous times, but I figured I would share the reaction I got from a professional publishing editor.
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THE OPENING PARAGRAPH:
Very powerful and chilling opening. Opening with a pistol in the protagonist's hand says so much. The reflection of the moon on the gun is vivid. Good opening!
THE TITLE:
Concise and thought provoking. It says so much in one word. Great title!
CONCLUSION:
This is a very poignant and powerful story. Your voice is clear and direct and the pace is excellent. You are particularly powerful when you are describing the abuse at the hands of bullies. The interaction between Shane and Mr. Webber is very engaging and at the end of the story, as you begin telling your son the story, that relationship brings everything full circle. Very nice ending. The notes from the author are good and ending with the poetry is very effective. I recommend a final edit to address the minor issues mentioned here. This book will resound deeply with many people who have felt the pain of being different, have watched a loved one go through it, or have been in a similar position as Mr. Webber. Very moving story!
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To those who have provided it, thanks for all the feedback you've given me on the many versions you've read. It looks like it will be in print and available for purchase by the masses within the next 4-6 months!
Congrats Baby!
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